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Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 2; Part 3.

Natalie's mind drifted to three days ago when she'd come home early. Walking in on Kenny with another girl in thier bed had destroyed an already eroding realtionship. She'd never felt such shock. She'd stood frozen in the doorway until the pair finally noticed her.
"Natalie!" Kenny had exclaimed, his blue eyes flying wide beneath his tousled hair. "This isn't--"
"What it seems?" She asked, amazed by her calm voice when her entire body seemed to quivering. "What is it?"
"Natalie, shut the door. Go downstairs and--"
"And let you continue?" She'd glared at the flushed young redhead wearing diamond stud earrings and nothing else. "I've seen you at the clinic. You have that white poddle Snickers. What a ridiculous name! He has a horrible dispostion." Natalie couldn't stop babbling as the reality of the situation fought for acceptance in her mind. "No wonder he's always irritable. You drag him in contantly and there's nothing wroing with him. Now I know the reason for you frequent visits."
"Natalie, please dont turn this into some ridiculous farce," Kenny said in a controlled voice as the women fumbled for the sheet to cover herself. "We'll talk later."
"I think not," Natalie replied coldly. "I dont think we'll ever talk again."
With that she had descended down the stairs of the townhouse, crossed the small foyer, and walked outside. As soon as she closed the door behind her and heard the lock click, she rememberd her purse. Her purse on the hall table holding her wallet and keys. The keys to Kenny's condo as well as her car keys. She was not only stranded with no money and transportation, she was also denied access to the place she'd called home fot the past eight months.
Oh, dear God, she'd thought in despair. Could this get any worse? Humiliated, she had rung the doorbell repeatedly until a blazing-eyed Kenny swung open the door wearing an old pair of jeans. "Why are you doing this?" He demanded.
"My purse." Natalie wanted to cry. Her throat was tight and the words grated. She blinked frantically. "Just give me my purse with my keys so I can leave. I'll be back this evening to pack."
"Nat--!"
"My purse!" 
He'd turned away from the door as tears spilled from her eyes. He retrieved the purse, handed it to her, and watched her stalk to her car.
She'd gone to a good restaurant not crowded at such an early house, and cried in the restroom for a good twenty minutes. Then she'd applied a lot of powder around her red nose and swollen eyes and sat in the darkened bar for the next three house. She felt like getting drunk, but the objective part of her knew oblivion wasn't the answer. Instead she'd slowly sipped two small glasses of Chablis and wished she had a friend to talk to. For the first time she realized she had no really good friends in Columbus. Kenny had monopolized her time. No, she'd let him monopolize her time. She hadn't made close friends here because they might interfere with her time with Kenny. Her friends were back home in Port Ariel. Her very best friend from childhood, Lily Peyton, was there. Suddenly the place Natalie grudgingly visited only twice a year was where she wanted to be more than anywhere in the world.

Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 2; Part 2.

"Coming!" Natalie rushed from her bedroom into the roomy kitchen filled with morning light. Sunshine bounced off the copper bottoms of cookware hanging above an island range, and plants cascaded from pots sitting around the many windows. Exercising his amateur interest in architecture, Andrew St. John had designed the house for his bride Kira and had it constructed on a beautiful piece of land running down to Lake Erie. Natalie had always loved it. She thought it reflected her father's personality--big, strong, open. The place was built of solid stone to stand up to the heavy northern winds, and glass expanses showed off the spectacular lake view. When she'd first left home and begun living in apartments, she'd left as if she couldn't get her breath.
"Sorry, Dad." she said taking her seat and picking up a glass of fresh-squeezed orange juice. "Im not used to being served breakfast."
"Thte boyfriend of yours not willing to cook a simple meal now and then?" Andrew asked, scooping up scrambled eggs.
Natalie set down her glass, groaning silently. Her father never liked Kenny Davis with his golden blonde hair, movie star features, and easy charm. "He's too slick." Andrew declared after one brief encounter. "I don't trust him." She'd dismissed her father's assessment. What was it based on? she asked herself then. Nothing but the fact the Kenny was handsome. Now it appeared that Andrew was had been right--Kenny wasn't trustworthy. She wasn't ready to capitulate to Andrew's judgement, however. As angry as she as with Kenny, Natalie still felt compelled to defend him. "Kenny is very busy, Dad. He is a brillant veterinarian," she said as Andrew set a plate heaped with food in front of her.
"Yes, a vet, not an M.D."
"Dad, I'm a vet."
"Who should have been an M.D."
Natalie sighed. This was an old argument. Old and impossible for her to win. Years ago Andrew had decided his daughter would become a surgeon like him. She'd balked. She had wanted to be a veterinarian since she was twleve, and she'd done exactly as she please. Andrew had not been happy about her career choice.
"Dad, I love animals and I love being a vet," she said patiently. "And as for Kenny, he didn't cook breakfast for me and I didn't cook breakfast for him. Anicare is the biggest animal clinic in Columbus. We were both on the run." She was determined not to belitte Kenny in front of her father even if her was the reason she's dragged her hurt and embarrassed self back to Port Ariel.
 

Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 2; Part 1.

Sunday Morning

Natalie slowly opened her eyes. Morning sun filtered dimly through the delicate willow-patterned curtains. A beautiful green coverlat lay over her drowsy bed. She drew a deep, lazy breath, then shot up in bed, her gaze frantically searching for the clock. Nine! She was due at Anicare an hour ago. She was on the Sunday morning shift. What had happened to the alarm?
Reality rushed back. She closed her eyes in relief and leaned back against the pillows. She wasn't at Anicare because she was officially on vacation--on vacation from her job, on vacation from Kenny Davis. She was back in Port Ariel in her old room and unless her nose deceived her, she smelled bacon and eggs frying.
Natalie stretched, yawned, considered going back to sleep for a few minuters, then thought of the breakfast being prepared for her. Under normal circumstances breakfast consisted of a bagel of an English  muffin eaten on the run.
She was swinging her legs out of her bed when her father yelled, "Natalie, breakfast! Hurry before I eat it all!"
She smiled wryly. He'd been saying the same thing since her mother left twenty years ago when Natalie was six. He'd always seemed to think cooking breakfast for her could make up for any emotional trauma--a runaway mother, a faithless lover.
"Be right there, Dad," She called, looking around the room for her robe. It lay on the white bedroom chair, a beautiful splash of pale green-and-pink silk. She wished desperately she had brought another robe. She'd grabbed this one because if fit neatly into the suitcase, but just looking at it caused her pain. She'd been so touched when she'd opened the package last Christmas morning and found the exquisite kimono-stayle robe she'd admired in a store a month before. She didn't think Kenny had been paying attention.
Tears pressed behind her eyes. "Stop it." She told herself firmly. "You're not going to sit around weeping and wailing all day."
She shrugged hurriedly into the robe and brushed back her long, black hair into a ponytail that hung halfway to her waist. A close inspection in the mirror showed that her large dark brown eyes--the eyes with the slight almond sland she'd inherited from her Eurasian mother--showed tiny red lines. She reached for the Visine. Just four margaritas last night at Panache with Lily Peton and now she had bloodshot eyes. Four was over her limit. After her second, though, it had seemed so good to see Lily again she didn't want the evening to end. After the third, she'd reached the maudlin stage and began describing in what she now realized was excruciating detail the demise relationship with Kenny Davis and how she'd come back to Port Ariel "just for a couple of weeks" to get her bearings. Natalie shook her head. What a thrilling night for Lily, but she'd understand.
"Everything is going to be ice-cold if you don't get out here," Natalie's father threatened.

Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 1; Part 4.

For just a moment Tamara had the impulse to forge ahead and take a look at the decrepit house. Then she glanced up. Dark clouds billowed. The summer storm was blowing in faster than she'd expected. She had no time for exploring now. She'd left several of her windows up and her new car in the driveway under a tree instead of in the garage.
Tamara turned and took several hurried steps down Hyacinth Lane. Tree limbs swayed and creaked. A silvery shaft of lighting ripped the gray sky. Tamara's ponytail blew wildly in the wind and a piece of dirt flew right into her eye. She stopped, rubbing at it gently. Damn. It had lodged under a contact lens.
A tear ran down her cheek. Lord, it hurt. She shut her and took a few more hurried steps. A scrabbling sound pulled her up short. She jerked her head to the right. What on earth was that? It sounded as if it were rushing at her.
"Happy Face?" She called. "Happy, is that you?"
The rushing sound stopped. Now there was silence, but a sinister silence. Something was watching her. She could feel the gaze running up and down her body. Her hands turned icy. She took a deep breath. Dont be silly, Tamars, she told herself sternly. What would be watching you? A chipmunk? A squirrel. Still, a dark wing of fear fluttered inside her.
"Happy Face?" she called again, hopefully, uncertainly.
But it wasnt the dog. Suddenly footsteps pounded through the underbrush, snapping vines, then smacking against the bare dirt. Tamara whirled blindly, not sure which direction to run. It didnt matter. In a flash an arm shot out from a slick, dark mass. Some kind of plastic coat. Tamara yelped in fear as the arm clenched around her neck and yanked backward. She dropped the violets she'd picked earlier. Her heels dragged the ground. She clawed uselessly at the sinewy arm locked directly under her chin. Her neck felt as if it were going to snap. Her eyes bulged in fear and shock as she gasped for air. "Wha--?"
A long steel razor with a bone handle flicked open. In one cold, frozen moment Tamara saw the blade glint in a flash of lighting before it slashed viciously across her throat and around her neck, cutting the vocal cords, severing the carotid artery. Blood spurted straight out, then cascaded down, drenching the sleeve of her white sweater.
"Their throat is an open tomb," a voice whispered caressingly in her ear as Tamara's slender body jerked grotesquely in its death throes.
The arm released Tamara. She fell in a heap, still twitching, her eyes wide, her blood soaking the dirt. The figure kneeled beside her and tucked a note into the fold of her sweater. Then it stood, bowed in a grotesque imitation of servitude, and wafted silently back into the dark, swaying forest.
Rain had begun to fall when the dog returned five minutes later. It loped toward Tamara, then abruptly stopped, dropping the stick. It whimpered unhappily. Finally it warily approached the body of the women who had greeted it so joyously earlier. When it smelled blood, the hair on its back stood up and it crouched, half-crawling to Tamara. It stared at her with warm amber eyes, the smiling gone from its face. Gently, almost reverently, it lay down and stretched its sleek neck across the gasping slash in hers, protecting her from further harm. As rain poured, the dog howled mournfully into the lonley night.




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Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 1; Part 3.
 
Tamara looked at her watched again. 8:45. She should return home. She could be bathed and ready for bed by the time Warren called. She smiled. When she was ready for bed, Lily would be ready for a night at trendy Panache. Their old friend Natalie St. John was back in town and Lily wanted to show her a good time. She'd invited Tamara along, but Tamara declined, telling her she would be waiting for Warren's call. "You're hopeless," Lily teasted. "I might get married some day but I'll never be as settled as you. Hovering around the phone at for a husband?" Apprarently Lily thought hovering only jusitfied in cases of handsome, unpredicable boyfriends.
The dog looked up at her expectantly. She's forgotten their game. "Okay, Happy Face." Tamara bent and picked up a stick. The dog shifted from paw to paw in anticipation. Tamara threw the stick far into the trees. The dog shot after it. Usually it returned in less than a minute with the stick, which it dropped at her feet. This Tamara heard it barking. The barking grew fainter. Obviously it had spotted a rabbit and was giving it a chase. At least she hoped it was a rabbit. She didn't want to be greeted by a dog reeking of skunk.
She stood on the road for a few minutes. Up ahead reared the remains of the Saunders House built back in the early nineteenth century when Port Ariel was called Winthrop. When the senior Saunderses died, their beautiful daughter Ariel became the loved of Captain Zebediah Winthrop, whose father founded the town. Ariel was labeled a "scarlet women" after she gave birth to Zebediah's son Thaddeus out of wedlock. In his youth Zabediah had been forced to marry a homely crab of a women named Mercy. While Zebediah sailed Lake Erie, Mercy and her pious friends delighted in wreaking pretty vengeances on Ariel and the baby, terrorizing the young mother. Then, when Thaddeus was barely one year old, Captain Winthrop's ships, the Mercy,
caught fire and foundered on the shore near Ariel's house. Ariel had spotted the wreck from her widow's walk and rushed to the rescue, single-handedly saving two injured sailors and her beloved Zeb from drowning.
Mercy died shortly afterward, mostly from bitterness and jealously and pure meanness, people claimed. She was barely in the ground when Zebediah married Ariel. Most citizens had forgiven her in light of her bravery and did not object when Zebediah changed the name of the town in her honor. Together they had two more children. Zeb died long before Ariel and she had a large monument built to him in the town square. Although she lived to be eighty, she never remarried.
As children Tamara and Lily were entranced by the story of Ariel who had lived alone on the windy shore of Lake Erie, tormented yet strong and loving. They thought she was beautiful, wonderful, courageous, and all that a women should be. They used to dress up and play for hours in the Saunders house, taking turns at pretending to be Ariel. Sometimes Natalie St. John played with them. Tamara had seen pictures of Ariel and thought that with her long black hair and dark eyes, Natalie made the best Ariel, but she never told Lily. Natalie was the only one of their friends with whom they shared the secret of the game. Natalie could always be trusted with a secret.

Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 1; Part 2.
 
Humming beneath her breath, Tamara crossed the lawn and walked down Hyacinth Lane, a wide dirt road running north through a wooded area. She delighted in the towering oaks, locust trees, and scattered dogwoods and crab apples. When the dogwoods and crab apples were in bloom, this place seemed like a fairy world.
She took a rubber band out of her sweater pockets and pulled back her long blonde hair in a ponytail. Delicate silver filigree earrings set with amethyst stones swayed in the breeze, tickling her neck. She tilted back her head, closed her eyes, and drew a deep breath. Clean, clear air tinged with the scent of approaching rain and the water of Lake Erie filled her delicate nostrils. When she was young, she and Lily had spent countless hours on the lake in their parents' cabin cruiser and their sleek twenty-foot inboard motorboat. The girls were excellent water-skiers. Warren went out with the family sometimes on the cabin cruiser, but he always stayed on board. He didn't even fish.
Something rustled in the underbrush. Naturally timid, Tamara grew motionless, her gaze scanning the side of the road. She knew the sound probably came from a small animal. Most of them were perfectly harmless except for poisonous snakes, although there weren't many of those around. Besides, a snake wouldn't make much noise and it certainly wouldn't attack unless threatened.
Her mind knew this. Her body didnt. She felt cold, imagining a sleek head rising up to bury venom-filled fangs in the skin of her ankle.
The rustling grew louder. Tamara stiffened. She was ready to turn and dash for when a large dog burst from the greenery on her left. It bounded to her, panting.
"Well, hello there!" Tamara exclaimed, laughing in relief. This was the fourth evening in a row she'd seen the dog on her walk. It had wiry black-and-tan hair, mostly black, and seemed to wear a perpetual smile. She called it "Happy Face." Showing no fear to humans, the dog approached her on slender tan legs with white paws, its curled tail wagging. Tamara bent to pet it. She had no idea what breed it was, but she thought it would be beautiful if it were bathed. Instead its hair was matted and slightly oily. It wore no collar, and a fresh scratch ran down the right side of its face.
Poor thing, Tamara thought. She'd love to have a dog, but Warren had firmly pronounced they could not take it in. He didnt like animals. The dog was so endearing, but it was getting thinner. She decided to buy dog food tomorrow. At least she could keep the dog well fed even if she couldn't give it a home.
Happy Face walked beside her for a while, glancing up as if for approval. Wild violets grew along the edges of Hyacinth Lane. Tamara stooped and picked a few while the dog waited patiently. A slate-gray catbird emitted its lonelt mewing call to the evening. A few ambitious fireflies were already hard at
work, blinking gaudily against the darkening sky.





Like I said in the first part, the whole first chapter is sorta slow, and even I know that.

Dont    C lo se   Your  Eyes Chapter 1; Part 1.
 
Saturday Night

Tamara dried the last crystal wineglass, held it up to the fading summer light shining through the kitchen window, and nodded. Spotless. She hated spots on glasses, particularly crystal. Tomorrow night, when Warren came home from his conference in Cleveland, they'd share a bottle of Chateau Latour Blanche on their sixth anniversary. Tamara was not a wine connoisseur, but he'd assured her the Latour Blanche was expensive and should be properly appreciated. When she'd fussed about spending a lot of money on a bottle of wine, he said it was a gift from a patient. Tamara knew better than to ask which one. Warren was a psychologist and never discussed his patients.
Tamara looked around the pristine kitchen. The whole house was spotless. With no children and no job, she had more than enough time to keep the house perfect.
Tonight, however, she had nothing left to clean. She'd even reorganized the kitchen cabinets and put down fresh shelf paper. She could work on her latest quilt, the lovely hummingbird design she created, but she wasn't in the mood. She could drop by the suicide hotline Warren had forced her to organize, but tonight she didn't want to hear any sad stories. She didn't enjoy Saturday night television and she felt too restless to read. Usually she took an evening walk, but a storm was predicted.
Tamara looked out the window and sighed. Daylight Saving Time extended light until nine o'clock. So far it was a lovelt evening, a bit cloudier than usual, but still nice. Surely the storm wouldn't hit for over an hour. That left plenty of time for a walk.
She grabbed an old white sweater off the coat tree beside the back door. It was mid-June, but Port Ariel, Ohio, sat on the edge of Lake Erie, which sent cool breezes off its water all year. The comfortable temperature was what draw so many tourists to the beach area every summer. Warren hated tourists, but Tamara spent most of her time at home and rarely had contact with them. Besides, they were good for local business and therefore good for her twin sister Lily, who owned a successful antique store downtown. Tamara was making the hummingbird quilt for Lily's shop. "People like old furniture but not old bedding. Only bedding that looks old," Lily always said. "I could sell three times the number of these goregous quilts you make!" Tamara was pleased by their popularity, but she never increased her production. Haste made for sloppy work.
As she automatically locked the back foor and descended the porch steps, Tamara glanced at her watch. Eight-thirty. Warren always called promptly at when he was out of town. She frowned. She must not be late for the call. Things were rocky between them. Warren had been irritable, quiet, and aloof for months. Tamara felt she disspointed that she hadn't been able to give him a child, although he never mentioned it. Lily contended that Warren didn't want a child--not everyone did. Tamara told her sister she was being ridiculous.
To be twins, they were so different, hardly like sisters at all except for their looks and their love for each other. Lily wasn't even religious in spite of their strict Catholic backgrounds. Ignoring Lily's good-natured skepticsims, Tamara had begun attending mass everyday, praying for the child that would draw Warren back to her. Now she knew her prayers had worked. Her periods were always irregular, but this time she was over a month late. She'd taken a home pregnancy test this morning and she had wonderful news for Warren, which she'd save until tomorrow evening when her returned.





I know this is starting off slow, but the information in this part is important. This is a mysterey/suspense story and I promise it will get better. Comments do help(: